I've had an idea for a story for a very long time and never took the time to really get into writing it. So tonight I wrote a prologue of sorts and I'm basically looking for help in deciding if it's worth continuing. I've never written a story before, so I'm not sure if my skills are enough to keep readers' interest. Please do not be afraid to be critical, I need to know!
If I do continue writing it, I will accompany the narrative with pictures from the Sims 2.
(I would like to note that this has not been thorougly edited for grammar or spelling.)